Thursday, June 15, 2017

Lg:use precise words to give accurate details to my reader
S.o.s precise nouns include your materials in your steps descriptive verbs clean/replace bossy verbs at the start
                            How to make a bottle
                             Cap spinner
Right now your broberley begging for a fidget spinner well if your parents say no to a fidget spinner i'm going to tell you how to make a spinner.
You will need skewers  hot glue marker bottle caps
Step 1 put a hole in the cap

 Step 2 glue the bottle caps together

Step 3put the skewer in

Step 4 grab a maker and put a mark glue

Step 5 there you have a perfect fidget spinner



2 comments:

  1. lots of precise words
    makes sense
    more detail

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  2. ns correct spelling
    bs good punctuation

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