Bigfoot

LG:elaborate 1 idea well

He has bright red eyes

That you can see from a mile away.

He tries to be alnusif and tries to stay away from people.

Tries to get food for its cubs

He's got shaggy long hair going right down his body and he's got dirt under his fingernails

                                                               Da nail

On friday i went to my mums work.To do it up because she was taking over.once she finished we went home and i fell over onto a board with nail in it and the nail pierced my skin and went into my meat.then i went to the hospital and got it stitched up then i got them removed on monday.

Lg:elaborate 1 idea well

S.o.s:consistent punctuation

                                       The boy who cried wolf.

Characters the boy the villages the sheep wolf and the boys dad the boy kept yelling wolf wolf.

Setting he was looking after the sheep and he kept saying wolf wolf help plzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

Action he can't help himself he kept saying help me plzzzzzzzz there's a wolf and he's getting the lams.

Problem there is a wolf and the villages did not believe him but he said there really is a wolf.

Solution the sheep are killed and he gets a very bad telling off.

Caesar the ape

Caesar the ape sat on a rake he takes the rake and ate a grape then along came koba with a little lama ready to go to war

Lg:use precise words to give accurate details to my reader

S.o.s precise nouns include your materials in your steps descriptive verbs clean/replace bossy verbs at the start

                            How to make a bottle

                             Cap spinner

Right now your broberley begging for a fidget spinner well if your parents say no to a fidget spinner i'm going to tell you how to make a spinner.

You will need skewers  hot glue marker bottle caps

Step 1 put a hole in the cap

 Step 2 glue the bottle caps together

Step 3put the skewer in

Step 4 grab a maker and put a mark glue

Step 5 there you have a perfect fidget spinner

                    Tiger quolls

sos use time connectives to order paragraphs eg firstly finally
LG use paragraphs to organise my ideas

Hi my name is max and i'm persuading every body to help the tiger quolls.ok the tiger quolls are endangered when you find a tiger quoll give it some bread.

P1 tiger quolls it looks like it's small it has white spots around the butox ereyer and it has a tail the size of a middle size drink bottle.

P2 tiger quolls can live up to 2-3 years.But member how i said they're endangered and they can live to 2-3 years because its prey to a lot of animals.But there predators to big rodents

P3 tiger quolls have a big appetite but they only eat once a week because it kills a rodent and all rodents that see the kill is very alert.

Conclusion i hope this has convinced you to help the tiger quolls.And hope this has taught you a little bit about tiger quolls.

The Letter

23-3-17

Jaylin & Max

Stratford Primary School

Dear Callie

Callie thanks for coming to wilkies pools and looking after all the kids. We all respect you giving up your time to come and help with camp and coming on the walk there and back. I enjoyed the walk.too Callie.Do you remember how cold the water was?, And once  again thanks for helping.

Dear Callie

Thank you for helping us at camp. We appreciate you taking time off work and coming to help us at camp on the walk and supporting us at the egg drop challenge.